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Dec. 10th, 2011

firefly124: charlie bradbury grooving in a glass elevator (Default)
than a sex scene is a fight scene. Actually, if it were a sex scene I was working on, I'd probably be saying the reverse. Both are far too easily reduced to, "and then this happened, and then that happened, and then ..." which is BORING! Am trying to implement some very good advice I once read about the description-to-action ratio, but am also reminded of the extent to which I suck at setting. Ah well. A challenge to be worked on.

*nose back to grindstone*

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