Anybody for a quick beta and/or Brit-pick?

My "usual suspects" are either traveling or already partying in the new year, so I'm tossing this out there. Anybody up for giving a short-short a quick once-over?

It's Doctor Who genfic, about 550 words. Mostly I need to know if it makes sense, but also if I'm making Jack sound too British, oddly enough. (I don't even know what to call that. Reverse Brit-pick?) It's for the spoiler_song One Night of Writing, so I have until midnight PST, hence the "quick" part of the request.

Pretty please with cinnamon sugar on top?

ETA: I think I'm covered! Thanks!

Fic: A River by Any Other Name Would Play a Different Song (DW, River, Jack, G)

Title: A River by Any Other Name Would Play a Different Song
Author: firefly124
Fandom: Doctor Who
Prompter: silvia_elisa
Prompt: Jack raising River. Baptised with a perfect name.
Rating/warning: G, kidfic
Word Count: 580
Summary: Jack should’ve known she was going to be a handful.
A/N: Written for the spoiler_song One Night of Writing. Huge thanks to alt_universe_me, elfwreck/elf, and queenortart for lightning beta-reading and Brit-picking! Also thanks to huskyfriends for the bizarre chat that led to part of River's heritage. Happy New Year, all!

( A River by Any Other Name Would Play a Different Song )